WALT complete the writing work shops and set follow up task I learnt that my teachers can be evil with lemons😈
And that writing paragraphs is fun
My next step is to work on my I need it to be more interesting
Wednesday 19 August 2015
Thursday 13 August 2015
Wednesday 29 July 2015
Friday 24 July 2015
Thursday 23 July 2015
My letter to Manu Vatu vai
This is my letter plan to Manu Vatu Vai I said that he ran down the whole field dodging tackles even really close ones and I said he scores so close to the out line but still stays in.
My WALT was to use a planning format to plan a letter to Manu Vatu Vai
The thing I need to work on is to create more ideas before I write.
Wednesday 22 July 2015
Shaun Johnson
This is Shaun Johnson he has one of the best septers in the world he plays for the warriors he's my 2nd favourite warrior 
Friday 3 July 2015
We're I live
This is the house I'm going to live with my dogs. Their names are going to be Coco Bean and Jellybean. If Caleb Bells would like to live in there he can but it'll cost $20 a week. If Joe Joe wants to, it'll be $100 a minute
Thursday 25 June 2015
Wednesday 24 June 2015
Maths is awesome when Miss Harris is here
This is one of maths strategies I have been learning with Miss H. We have been learning to borrow from the next number to help us subtract. My next step is to know what to do when there are zeroes in the top number.
Tuesday 23 June 2015
Thursday 18 June 2015
Monday 15 June 2015
Friday 12 June 2015
Manu vaituvai
This is Manu he is the best winger in the world hes got the manly looks I like his name because he has the same name as my dad I like his position
Thursday 11 June 2015
My writing
We are learning to make are story better e.g there was a cat.there was a black foggy evil looking cat.
And this is my story
When I was a child my dad bought me a remote control plane it inspired me so now In the weekends I fly in my plane but one day I was checking my engine and I slipped then I was hanging of my wing Ahhh! I screamed baing boom smash I was on an awful island bones Ahhh a helicopter appeared and rescued me
Wednesday 10 June 2015
Thursday 28 May 2015
Story 2
Where's jak I said a zombie ok let's get out of here Isaac look a gun shop lets get Amode dan dan dan daaaan dan dan dan dan daaaan lets have a party aaaaaaaaaaaa yay Jesse WHAT CALEB! I find ak47 Isaac play the ukulele in caking fat zombie I said so Isaac hit the zombie with his ukulele ha ha ha what so funny in caming fat zombie never gets old haa raaaa lets get out of here before we became zombie tie so we ran out we find a car caleb got in the car he told us to put on our seat balts on its going to be a bampy ride mabe if you staret Isaac would not be a zombie so we killed all the zombies look there's
A car why is there zombies around it I don't know how do we get there
Story 1
Day one i said we were on the plane and over 4,000 people had been bitten the captain was swerving beep! Are you a beep! Sir yes sir well drop then we were on land it was so silent hello I said In the distance a zombie was looking at us with a grin captain said pick up your GUNS!! raaaaaaaa!! said the zombie dave ahhhh caleb thorvin jak and Noah Isaac Isaac yo-yo-your a zombie ahhhhhhhh where's thorvin I asked.caleb jak where's Noah a zombie caleb said look it's thorvin in a ditch he found the captain and Isaac and caleb found two needles we stabbed it into them Raaa your wellcome Isaac it didn't work on the captain so the captain bit Thorvin and ran away with the captain ahhhhhhhh I said we got to go came on caleb and Isaac END OF STORY 1
Wednesday 25 March 2015
Welcome post
Welcome post
Welcome to my learning blog for 2015. i will be sharing my learning with you. i would like you to make comments to help me with my learning
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