Thursday, 11 June 2015

My writing

We are learning to make are story better e.g there was a cat.there was a black foggy evil looking cat.  

And this is my story

When I was a child my dad bought me a remote control plane it inspired me so now In the weekends I fly in my plane but one day I was checking my engine and I slipped then I was hanging of my wing Ahhh! I screamed baing boom smash I was on an awful island bones Ahhh a helicopter appeared and rescued me


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